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jillprewett
 21 Jul 2008, 21:43 #39882 Reply To Post
Thanks Chris, for a truly constructive review and heartfelt response.

I found your comments to be practical, and shall act upon them. You sound like my dream reader!

Your wise observations are absorbed and after I've mowed the lawn, I'll get onto revisions.

All the best with your work and thank you again.

Jill
Chris Pitt
 24 Jul 2008, 15:11 #40072 Reply To Post
Thank you for a pleasurable read, Jill. Happy mowing.

Do you have any tips on how to stop the green stuff growing so quickly?
Welsh Nut
jillprewett
 24 Jul 2008, 17:36 #40086 Reply To Post
Ignore it. That's my advice. It's only attention seeking.

Wasn't it Quentin Crisp who said, 'After the first four years, the dirt doesn't get any worse'?

Mind, he never lived with two pugs.

JJ
spotty leopard
 24 Jul 2008, 17:41 #40087 Reply To Post
Dust. He said dust. I don't think it works with dirt.
Lexi

POD...visit my blog
jillprewett
 24 Jul 2008, 18:43 #40096 Reply To Post
Thank you, Spotty!

That's where I've been going wrong.
I wondered why the place was looking like a bombsite.

Dust/dirt: there's such a thin line between bohemian and barbarian.

Jill

Chris Pitt
 25 Jul 2008, 21:36 #40171 Reply To Post
Excuse me for being a real dork, but I've just discovered these forums and was shocked to see the message from you Jill. And then I typed in a response and - wow - someone else has written stuff too. Hi there.

That's amazing. I could grow to like this. Of course, I'll never get any writing done and I'll probably get sacked from the day job. I'll have to get me one of those little images as well, sort of like a corporate identity thing.


Anyway, this weekend I'm going to put my feet up. Bugger the grass.

Welsh Nut
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