Hi Karen, thanks for your review you make some good observations, which I will follow.

The opening back story has been added recently as reviewers wanted to get more of a feel for the dynamics between the couple. I wonder if you could elaborate on how I muddied the mood. I'm not disputing your comment, I'm just looking for ways to improve.

This was my thinking, it's late at night and dark. She's had a great time at the party which was also dark, as discos can be . She has not seen the annoyance grow on his face and has no idea that he's the jealous type.( new relationship) It is not until she sees his body language in the taxi that she realizes anything is wrong.
If you can help me make it clearer I'd be most grateful,
best wishes, Karen.