Hi Jo. I was allocated Eesha's Calling to review. I'd printed it out to read and I've come on line to do the review and the chapters have vanished. (It hasn't timed out). Have you by any chance taken the story off YWO? I know you were about no.20, but can't find it now.
If you're doing an edit, I just want to say keep on with the story, I thoroughly enjoyed it.