I've just joined YouWriteOn and posted my first short story today and have just read my first review. I must admit I didn't find it very helpful and found some of the comments rather cutting. I am looking forward to reviewing other people's work and know the ethos of YouWriteOn to be encouraging and constructive and hope that my reviews of other people's work to be in this vein.

Looks like Vivi left Lexi - whoever gave that review, I hope thay are proud of themselves
Stop the sketch - it's too silly