Only recently looked at the message board! Blame senility! Very many thanks to reviewers of In the Mouths of Monsters. Based on the first half-dozen I tried to lead readers into the chemical plant more gently, with a greater emphasis on Alan's home life; and also savagely cut Ivor's article leaving just the top and tail. Very valid criticisms I now see, and reflected in recent scoring. Special thanks to Mulberry for being so enthusiastic and inspiring. Keep up the good work, everyone.